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Frostpaw
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« Thread Started on Apr 28, 2006, 3:16pm »

Name:Frostpaw
Rank:Med-cat's Apprentice
Age:7 moons
Fur stile: Short
Sex:She-cat
Clan:Shadeclan
Description: She is a very quiet but strong she-cat her mentor is the Shadeclan Med-cat. She is ALWAYS loyal to her clan never breaks the code. She is also a little nosey but ends up saving her clan from danger. She never hurts a clan member and has listened well but can be a little mischivious. (Spelt it wrong!). But she is a very nice cat and is good at learning.
Rp example: Frost paw's sleek fur shone in the sun and she haeld her body close to her mentor. It was her 2nd day of training and wanted to make it the best day of training. She listend close for a plump mouse of it running. Then she heard it. The med-cat watched closley not making a sound and lay still. Frostpaw Leaped and killed the mouse in a second then dropped it in the pile of food.
Piccy: http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/60/2167/1600/miss_pearl.0.jpg

« Last Edit: Apr 26, 2006, 8:22pm by silentpaw »

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Re: Frostpaw
« Reply #1 on Apr 29, 2006, 9:07am »

Your Description is your personality...and I need a discription even if you provided a piccy. And you also need a History and codeword(find in rules).
And you used your own form you're suppose to use this one:

Name:
Rank:
Age:
Gender:
Clan:
History:
Appearance:
Personality:
IC:
Codeword:

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Re: Frostpaw
« Reply #2 on Apr 29, 2006, 7:58pm »

I forgert WHAT IS IC???????????

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Re: Frostpaw
« Reply #3 on Apr 29, 2006, 8:04pm »

Name:Frostpaw
Rank:Med-Cat apprentice
Age:7 moons
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Shadeclan
History:Born In shadeclan
Appearance: http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/60/2167/1600/miss_pearl.0.jpg
Personality:Catching food for elders and clan being Loyal to her clan members
IC:Frostpaws Ears pricked. She stood up. Then sniffed the air for what the noise was. Her ears went back and her nose crinkled. "Enemies!" She hissed the deputy heard what she said and jumped to his feet. "Enemies?" "YES!" she hissed The clan leader woke up. Then yawned. The sent got closer and as soon as the rest of the cats woke up a ton of enemie cats came to their terretory. The leader spoke and told all kits elders and Apprentices to stay in their dens. But Frostpaw didnt listen She fought for her clan and soon the battle was finished. None of the clan cats died!
Codeword:Starshine

« Last Edit: May 4, 2006, 3:06pm by Frostpaw »

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Re: Frostpaw
« Reply #4 on Apr 30, 2006, 8:37pm »

IC is your roleplay example and I said you have to put the description for your charrie even if you added a pic. And can you make her personality a bit longer? Like what makes her mad and happy and all that stuff.

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